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April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you finished this. I'm glad they stopped them without outside help. No one needs to know what happened to those poor students.
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April 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Cant wait for the sequel!
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November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very suspenseful chapter. It was a wonderful idea, having Ryou use insulin as a weapon. I'm only disappointed that the fun ended so soon. Keep on writing!
btw glad you enjoyed my story, I have a few chapters written, I'm just hunting down a new beta reader
btw glad you enjoyed my story, I have a few chapters written, I'm just hunting down a new beta reader
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June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness!!~ I'm gone for a few months and come back to new chapters! :D
God, this fic breaks my heart and turns me on at the same time. LOL. After that last chapter I feel like all the children are going to need years of therapy to get over that one. Bakura is so delightfully evil and twisted. I hate to say it, but I can't wait until he and Ryou do something more than a blowjob.
I feel bad for Atem too. Usually I read fics where he and Yugi are a couple, so it was hard to get rid of that thought here (even though they're cousins in your fic).
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
God, this fic breaks my heart and turns me on at the same time. LOL. After that last chapter I feel like all the children are going to need years of therapy to get over that one. Bakura is so delightfully evil and twisted. I hate to say it, but I can't wait until he and Ryou do something more than a blowjob.
I feel bad for Atem too. Usually I read fics where he and Yugi are a couple, so it was hard to get rid of that thought here (even though they're cousins in your fic).
Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is one sexy-ass fic~!
Bakura and Marik are my all-time favorite villains in the series and it's so great to see them working together and torturing everyone like the crazed sexual deviants they are.
Sure I somewhat feel sorry for the class being put in such a traumatizing situation ...
But to be honest, who WOULDN'T wanna die at the hands of two insanely hot men?
It's interesting how you made Marik the older brother of Malik (Yaoi incest is niiiice. Twincest is wincest tho xD) And how Yami is Yugi's cousin and the head of the police.
Also, I love the multiple pairings and found Bakura and Marik cute at times with their little arguments, fights and their insane sex scene.
Blood lust is one of my favorite kinks. <3
Anyway, love the fic so far!
Keep it up and can't wait for more. :3
Bakura and Marik are my all-time favorite villains in the series and it's so great to see them working together and torturing everyone like the crazed sexual deviants they are.
Sure I somewhat feel sorry for the class being put in such a traumatizing situation ...
But to be honest, who WOULDN'T wanna die at the hands of two insanely hot men?
It's interesting how you made Marik the older brother of Malik (Yaoi incest is niiiice. Twincest is wincest tho xD) And how Yami is Yugi's cousin and the head of the police.
Also, I love the multiple pairings and found Bakura and Marik cute at times with their little arguments, fights and their insane sex scene.
Blood lust is one of my favorite kinks. <3
Anyway, love the fic so far!
Keep it up and can't wait for more. :3
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Yugi even though he seemed to enjoy it. It was his first time. Bakura and Marik are awful. I hope they get what's coming to them. Jou will never forget this and will feel guilty about it.
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The way you describe the students fear is well done. You're doing a great job with the psychological torture, especially using Yugi against Atem like that. The threesome was pretty good, my only advice is to go into more detail with the sex scenes. I'm really enjoying this story and it's inspired me to work on a dark prison fic which will be up here soon ;
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April 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's like you read my mind and put all my favorite pairings in there. And you write them all so well. Please continue this soon.
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a very well written story and a little scary. But, I am enjoying it! Do not apologize for adding religion. I think god has been cut out of enough things as is. Can't wait for the next update!
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March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. Poor Ryou is being very humiliated. He and Malik are very unlucky in that, but at least, they are still alive.