rate_review Reviews

When Yugi started dancing with Anzu, my mouth dropped open. I was stunned. It was like I was actually seeing it. Heehee!! Absolutely beautiful. I think I've read everything from you now. I hope you decide to write another epic masterpiece soon. I'll check frequently. I'm gonna see what some of your recommendations have in store for me. ;-)

Hey, the story is great so far, but it doesn't feel that the story is complete despite this being the last chapter. Would you be up to writing one more chapter, perhaps with a lemon in it? I know you were probably pressed for time, trying to get this story finished by christmas and that's why it lacks the completeness factor to me, but I feel one more chapter with Atemu and Yugi expressing their love for eachother would be perfect in summing this story up. I hope you aren't upset at me for saying that, this story and your other ones truly are exquisite, I think you were just pressed for time on this one.

Cute. Please update again soon! I want to find out what Anzu tells Miho in the kitchen... Thanks for posting this great story so far btw.

Okay.... this is -adorable-! :D lol I love the way you're managing to portray Yugi without chopping off his balls and giving him an estrogen shot. I also love the way you're portraying Anzu. She's really -not- an evil character, and it's nice to see someone not demonize her in a canon fic (AU is fair game <.<). So well done, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Hahaha, this is great. Miho is a bit like the clihcé-annoying-stupid-girl you find in slash, but it's okay.
I would love to see more interaction between Seto and Jou.
Curious to know how Atemu will react to a more confident Yugi :b

I -love- this story. I'm sorry I didn't review the first chapter, but I wanted you to know this is the best puzzleshipping fic I've read in some times, and mostly for one reason: Anzu. She's just like she SHOULD be, being their friend even though she loves them both. It's so rare to see her like this, in most fics she is the bitch who wants to destroy the relationship. -_-'
Damn, Atemu and Yugi are adorable. <3 You know what? I think it'd be great if Yugi became the 'dominant' one in bed. I think you've given him enough self-confidence to make it plausible, plus nobody would see that coming. XD
(Hehe, nevermind me. I just loooove seme-Yugi, he's so friggin sexy, but I know many people don't think it works ^_^')
Anyway, great work! I love this fic and I can hardly wait for next chapter. :D

OMG this is soo adorable! I can't wait for more!

Wonderful job so far, Tavi! I have to think of an idea for a Christmas one too and so far..nada. lol...can't wait for more!

Haha, I love this! It has great potential!
As usual I'm squeeling at SetoJou, I'm thankful it was only a phone-call, else I don't think I would have the present of mind to think about the current problem. I've got a solution, it (almost) never fails: Get them drunk, under the right circumstances and in a room alone together. piece of cake ;).
Looking forward to the next update!

Hi ya! Good to hear from ya! A Great start to a Christmas fic. Can't wait for next chappy. Hurry,hurry,please.