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for curses of the past

by HoLvHoT

person TheGreatSetoKaiba
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Keep in mind when you start a sentence, it should begin with a capital letter. When you use just the letter "I" in a sentence, it is always capitalized. For example, "Joey and I went to the restaurant." Sentences should end with a period, question mark, or exclamation point depending on whether it's a statement, a question, or an exclamation.

In short, I think it would be good if you got a beta reader who has a firm grasp on the English language.

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