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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pales slightly* Jou RAPED Seto? Uh... OOC a bit there. Yami engineered the rape of his cousin and once friend? Hugely OOC. Seto angsting and unable to cope? Didn't consider abortion? WAY OOC.
In general I don't care for Mpreg that isn't backed up by biological data. In Maggiemay's 'Lovesick' the physiology was explained quite well, as it has been in a few more. Asking readers to suspend disbelief without some kind of explanation is a tough row to hoe.
More details please and please warn people of OOC.
Puppys_seahorse
In general I don't care for Mpreg that isn't backed up by biological data. In Maggiemay's 'Lovesick' the physiology was explained quite well, as it has been in a few more. Asking readers to suspend disbelief without some kind of explanation is a tough row to hoe.
More details please and please warn people of OOC.
Puppys_seahorse
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
If m-preg was real, would the baby come out of the man's penis? It makes a lot more sense than coming out of the ass unless the character was shitting out a baby he ate for breakfast. I bet Dark Bakura would do that, hehe.
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November 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Seto! He is so different in this story but I really can't say that I mind...it makes the story sort of cool.
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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow this is great keep up the good work