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September 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Finfish this, Pleasepleaseplease.
And put more detail in the lemon scenes.
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November 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story so far. Please continue it.
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November 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay let me start with I like this story. Yugi having to go through all of that...just plain horrible. But I do have a favor when you go to a different person or different place could do some sort of line. It was sort of hard when Yami is talking to Yugi's grandpa then you have Yami at the hospital. That took me a couple of sentences to realize that you had just done that. Made it a little difficult for me at least.
But getting back to your story: I really like how you are doing this with Yami and Yugi it makes it seem like a better story than the ususal ones out there. Also a question: How old is Yugi and Yami in your story? Thank you for a good story and I look forward to more.
But getting back to your story: I really like how you are doing this with Yami and Yugi it makes it seem like a better story than the ususal ones out there. Also a question: How old is Yugi and Yami in your story? Thank you for a good story and I look forward to more.