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for Intoxication

by DarkSynfulLegend

person JamzyOne
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next, but I do have one little niggle. His name isn't Mr. Katsuya, it's Mr. Jonouchi.

I understand you getting it wrong because it took me quite a while to get it right in my own head, but now whenever I see it, it really jars me out of any story I see it in.

Looking forward to the next chapter though. ^_^
person nari-chan
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it please update soon :)
person Nocrose
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOO MISTRESS !!! HOW DARE YOU TEASE US WITH THE EVIL CLIFFHANGER XD
schedule October 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic :)'
It has great potential and you write realy good. I love the idea of this bar, and am looking forward to hearing about Jou's first day. The man's name is Draco? I shot straight to Harry Potter in my mind XD.
I will keep an eye out for this :P
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you to Yaoirose for pointing out that Seto is a brunette and not a raven haired sex god. *erms* anyway, I fixed it in the chapter and I thank Yaoi for the correction.