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November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it :D
I read the first chapter and reviewed some time ago, and now I've read the whole damn thing and it's great! I'm still fascinated with the bar/club. I want to work there XD. I loooove Bakura & Atemu in this :P . Especially Bakura, but I've got a soft spot for him, so let's forget that for a moment or two.
Despite the fact that I really love this fic, I felt that the ending seemed a bit rushed, and maybe a bit too.. sweet? I'm not big on forced happy endings, and I felt that something is missing in the end. It seemed at bit strange for Seto to be singing, but I'm still in love with the idea of him singing that song because it fits him! Well done picking that song for him :D.
I read the first chapter and reviewed some time ago, and now I've read the whole damn thing and it's great! I'm still fascinated with the bar/club. I want to work there XD. I loooove Bakura & Atemu in this :P . Especially Bakura, but I've got a soft spot for him, so let's forget that for a moment or two.
Despite the fact that I really love this fic, I felt that the ending seemed a bit rushed, and maybe a bit too.. sweet? I'm not big on forced happy endings, and I felt that something is missing in the end. It seemed at bit strange for Seto to be singing, but I'm still in love with the idea of him singing that song because it fits him! Well done picking that song for him :D.
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October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!!!!!! I loved reading this!!! The saying that Kaiba told Jou.."You are the only intoxication I will ever need" I JUST LOVE THAT!!!!!
I'm sad that it ended though....
Side note: If I was Atemu and Bakura, I would sneak into prison and grab Jou's asshole father's spirit and torture it until it can't survive any more....! Break that shit into tiny little pieces just like his body, IF it wasn't a crime...
**smiles*** Great Fic!!!
I'm sad that it ended though....
Side note: If I was Atemu and Bakura, I would sneak into prison and grab Jou's asshole father's spirit and torture it until it can't survive any more....! Break that shit into tiny little pieces just like his body, IF it wasn't a crime...
**smiles*** Great Fic!!!
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October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it all i have to say is amazing:)
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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pouts* I think Bakura should have gotten to have more fun with the jerk-off. More maiming would have been wonderful. But regardless, Yay for Bakura getting angry. I like this story, and can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope that bastard didn't kill joey! I look forward to reading this..by far my favorite seto/joey fic!!
Post very, very soon!
Post very, very soon!
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
loved it ! please keep up the good work and update soon
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cant we just let the pharoh send his father to the shadow realm and be done with it ?lol
but that would make for a short story . good work and please update soon
but that would make for a short story . good work and please update soon
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh man im thininking joe was gonna beet the shit out of seto hee hee
it was gonna be like WAM !!! upside the head
bloddy nose and joe saying STOP CALLING ME MUT YOU RICH BACGS BASTARD XD
it was gonna be like WAM !!! upside the head
bloddy nose and joe saying STOP CALLING ME MUT YOU RICH BACGS BASTARD XD
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG sex was so smexy expetialy thw squeaze every last drop part ... awww such an epic ending ^+^ again mistress you over exeed yourself
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October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is getting Soooooo good!!!! What a way to end a shitty evening for me!
Thanks!!! I can't wait to read more!
Thanks!!! I can't wait to read more!