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by lizzie88

person YamiKuro
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Still amazinG! I love it! I can't wait for more. Those gloves sounded painful. he should teach Ryou teh wonderful world of blowjobs, lol. XD
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yay~ that was awesome. And yay that Mariku-Malik are coming in 8D Now dust the floor! mwaha. I agree someone saying that part of a chapter should be in Bakura's POV. But I love the story~!
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow! you really know how to write bondage, it's nice to see that there's actual sex involved! and even with it being au they're still the same guys. (i hate the whiny crybaby most people make ryou.)

i'm definitely curious what ryou was being measured for, especially considering it was just his arms. oh and if you're asking for suggestions, i think alittle water torture would be fun... maybe a stripper pole in the shower... and even with ryou's little revelation i think having an audience would really bother him.
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still an awesome story. Are you really going to maybe bring Marik/Malik into the story? I remember a few chaps back you said something about it. I do enjoy reading this.
schedule October 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aah~ I about jumped out of my chair when this got updated! Thought it was a little short, but I have some guesses on what that guy came for :P I still say Mariku should show up for some interesting-...ness. Lol. Love the story!
person YamiKuro
schedule October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I FRIGGEN LOVE IT! *bows to you* AmazinG!!

Well...Enemas are always fun. So is Double Penetration, but then you'd have to bring someone else in....So is branding. Bakura should brand him!! ^_^

Love,
Kuro
schedule October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
>.> I have not watched that much porn.......well ok ^-^ Ryou has yet to get any blood play or any non restrained command play you know when you have to do what I say as I say it controls the orgasm and shows that the "master" is in full control without the bounds.

J-chan

schedule October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! And I think it does have a plot... but I wonder if you could have a chapter with Bakura's thoughts about Ryou. I think that it would be enlightening to find out about what Bakura thinks and other stuff as he of course plots delicious punishments for Ryou.
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome. Ryou really does make a good sex slave. :) I'm enjoying this fic a lot.
person YamiKuro
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter. YOu leave us wanting for more! I love it!

Wanting more,.

Kuro