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March 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice and disturbing! This really fits with the personality Yami shows in season 0, and you have a really nice flow to the prose going there. Reminds me of those first few episodes of YGO 0, where I kept thinking things like "is this really meant for kids to watch?" and "holy shit that kid is schizo with multiple personalities" and "ok, ancient egyptian spirit is NOT ONE OF THE GOOD GUYS".
That atmosphere sort of slowly faded from the show, as Yami stopped killing people (will never forget how he burned that one guy alive - personal squick there), and he somehow went from homicidal maniac to everybody's best friend. Still, it's nice to find it again in fanfic, since that's what made the show stand out so much to begin with.
I like what you did with Bakura's name there, though I know that, in the manga, that's just Ryou's last name, his spirit does deserve its own denomination.
That atmosphere sort of slowly faded from the show, as Yami stopped killing people (will never forget how he burned that one guy alive - personal squick there), and he somehow went from homicidal maniac to everybody's best friend. Still, it's nice to find it again in fanfic, since that's what made the show stand out so much to begin with.
I like what you did with Bakura's name there, though I know that, in the manga, that's just Ryou's last name, his spirit does deserve its own denomination.
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's too bad this isn't a sex story. I really like it :)