rate_review Reviews

The last few days had me reading 21 chapters of your story and DAMN if I didn't enjoy it.
I was surprised by the long time jumps in the middle and the direction you took the story after that, but it turned out interesting.
I like the concept of Asperger's Syndrome for the Kaiba brothers. I looked it up and it fits so well, wow.

Can't wait to read another chapter. =)
~jea

Wow, Mokuba's one crazy bastard.


....That's actually something I would picture the little bugger doing. Anything for his 'Nii-sama' of course.

It took me two days because I share the computer with my brothers, but I finally finished this fanfic (At least, up to chapter 21 as you can see)
You left me slacked jawed.
To be honest, there are only a few fanfics that take the time and the effort to check on all the possibilities and the aspects of the kind of mental stress and the repercussions of things going on with the Brothers. I bow to your ability to make things right.
I loved how much the boys stayed In character. Even Mokuba turned to be a fairly accurate view of what we know that could be the mind of a troubled person.
As I said, I loved this.
I hope to see more to come.

I registered JUST to review this awesome piece of work.

I honestly believe this is the most realistic take on Kaiba and Jou's relationship. It's dark, edgy, and extremely well written.

I love how you portayed Jou. He's the most humane and sympathetic character in this story. Anyone could feel or relate what he's going through. I can feel the dread and conflict between what's right and wrong. He may be madly in love with a sadistic bastard, but he realizes that he couldn't live with himself if he was with a murderer. Mokuba was played perfectly for that part, seriously. The build up to reveal him as the true killer was pretty suspenseful. His odd relationship with Yugi is lulzy as I found his perverseness amusing. XD

Kaiba characterized as the rich, creepy rich sociopath is awesome. I was surprised that he has Aspergers, which is a clever explanation for his behavior. His genuine love and passion for Jou is heartbreaking, really.

I usually look down on OCs, but yours are interesting. |D It moves the plot foward~

kk I'll stop rambling.

Please update. :] I can't wait for the next chapter~~

OMFG!!! This Mokuba is damn right scary but I can't help but LOVE him even MORE!!! Does that make me a bad person? Oh well, great chapter. Thank you for the update. I already can't wait for the next one.

Wonderful, wonderful. Continue

Thank you for reminding me of why this will always be my favorite pairing of all time.

At first I was just skimming chapter 1 to test the story, but I quickly found the need to go back and actually read it.

And how glad I am that I did.

You had me hooked with the first chapter and have kept me enthralled ever since. No only are your characterizations of the regular cast spot on, but your OC's are absolutely FANTASTIC! Your descriptions of all those involved in this story and their interactions makes me feel like I'm standing there watching every move.

If this is your first foray into fan fiction, I applaud your stellar efforts and can't wait to see more of what you have to offer.

Thanks for sharing!

'Ko

P.S. This is one of those rare moments on aff.net when I wish that they had a way to mark favorite stories like on ff.net because I'd surely mark this story as one! I encourage you to post this there if you have an account (and it won't get you anto any rule violation trouble) and also on fosff.net where the rules are much like they are here.

I love this fic. I'm really enjoying all the misunderstandings between Jou and Seto. They just seem so natural. Congratulations on portraying quite a realistic romantic relationship between the two.

Oooh, I'm really loving this story :3 ~ Keep up the great work!