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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAMN you had me there.
But it makes sense, of course Mokuba would protext Jou.
And just as logically, seto would resent him for causing the whole thing (at least at first?).
But if everything stays the same, if Mokuba still feels like he did everything right and will continue to do so - then everything Jou did was in vain and only caused Roland's death. =(
And now he's back in the states, god dammit.
Thx for the frequent updates.
~jea
But it makes sense, of course Mokuba would protext Jou.
And just as logically, seto would resent him for causing the whole thing (at least at first?).
But if everything stays the same, if Mokuba still feels like he did everything right and will continue to do so - then everything Jou did was in vain and only caused Roland's death. =(
And now he's back in the states, god dammit.
Thx for the frequent updates.
~jea
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November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I'm always excited when you update. I have to say though that Mokuba is really pissing me off in this one. Although that might be because my brother has asperger's and he pisses me off all the time! I love Mokuba no matter what but I hope Seto or Joey can kick his ass and get him to quit playing around! Although I think if my hunch is correct Seto got shot which is very sad! Please tell me everyone's going to be ok! Please keep writing and updating!
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November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I feel like shouting a big "NOOOO" to the sky while striking a dramatic pose, possibly in slow motion.
Dammit, Seto took that bullet, didn't he? T_Tx
But you're not gonna let him die, are you? No, you like living to write more chapters, yes you do. =)
XD
Dammit, Seto took that bullet, didn't he? T_Tx
But you're not gonna let him die, are you? No, you like living to write more chapters, yes you do. =)
XD
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November 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Something tells me Mokuba planned for Roland to do that too. (It would so... play into his plans. Since he's, you know, cuckoo for cocoa puffs. *lol*)
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*grips her hair with agitation as she reads*
*wails in despair when she realize that there's no more to chapter 23*
*begs ogg for more story soon*
'Ko
*wails in despair when she realize that there's no more to chapter 23*
*begs ogg for more story soon*
'Ko
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November 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!
Man, I love how confident Mokuba is. Although, I wasn't surprised when Roland took the blame but it didn't make it less suspenseful.
Jou's so badass, though. But for some reason I think it may not be Seto who took the shot...
Man, I love how confident Mokuba is. Although, I wasn't surprised when Roland took the blame but it didn't make it less suspenseful.
Jou's so badass, though. But for some reason I think it may not be Seto who took the shot...
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Seto's attitude when it comes to sex.
Sex first, drama later.
*thumbs up*
Aside from that: I'm a little scared what you've got planned next. *shivers*
Thx for the update! ^_^x
~jea
Sex first, drama later.
*thumbs up*
Aside from that: I'm a little scared what you've got planned next. *shivers*
Thx for the update! ^_^x
~jea
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November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am currently in love with this story. I started reading it on saturday, and I simply couldn't stop until I read it all. Now you have me in complete suspense. I can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG
What a great story. Mokuba's character was done beautifully. I can't imagine what will Jou do from this point.
What a great story. Mokuba's character was done beautifully. I can't imagine what will Jou do from this point.
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*stunned by recent revelations*
*eagerly awaits more of story*
'Ko
*eagerly awaits more of story*
'Ko