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Okay, where should I start... It took me three days to read this story, and I don't remember being so thrilled to have free time to immerse myself in a story since HP4 came out (I was very young and caught up in that fandom, I read it in two days straight). The major difference is that your story was absolutely AMAZING, mature in form and substance, enthralling, coherent, creative, hott and left me wanting more. I've already read Graffiti 'till your last update and cannot wait to read more from you! You're a great writer!

So, it took me two days to read through this whole story up to chapter 25. First, it is freaking amazing. Totally. Second, I cannot wait to see what is going to happen in the next chapters of this wonderful fic. Last, but not least, this has got to be one of the best fics I have ever read in this fanbase. Please add more soon and keep up this amazing work!

My god! Thank you! It's been FOREVER since anyone posted anything that didn't sound like a 12 year old wrote it. Not just that, This story's fucking brilliant!
(and the whole Mokuba/Katsuya scene just made me scream "creepy" for 5 minutes.... It's been a long time since there's been anything worth reacting, too)

Is that really the last chapter?

I agree that it needs at least an epilogue. It just ends so... abruptly.

*puts on puppy eyes* please?

But even if you don't choose to write one, I really enjoyed the story. :-)

Noticed the changes. But you can't make this the last chapter. You need *at least* an epilogue!
Pretty please? =)

Oh dear god almighty.. Seto, Mokuba dosen't need to be cut off from money and fired, he needs to be put in a mental institution!! GOD, the kid is a mental case.. He has crossed the line from serious Asberger to, VERY serious Asberger who can't function in normal society! OR he would, if someone was able to control him. Damn that high IQ and all..
I'm seriously worried about Yugi. He has more moral than that, he wouldn't let that happen.. Unles Mokubas plan really makes ALOT of sense, which I am somehow doubting.. And Mario! Son of a bitch! Still like him though :P.
ICELAND!! I've always wanted to go to Iceland.. It's fantastic.

You keep surprising me, you know?
I quite like it.
And DAMMIT you update fast, it's amazing! =D

Oh my god.. It's not done yet, is it? IS IT?!

I can't comment on all the characters I want to, because then I wouldn't be done before tomorrow morning, but by GOD I love this story!
I'm especially fascinated with the Asberger, and that you brought that in to explain the Kaiba brothers' problems. Many don't bother and just write it off as their personalities. My little brother has Asberger as well and it was intruiging to read about things that I can so clearly relate to his behaviour. After reading this I'm also suddenly so grateful for him being a light case, and being him. Mokuba scared the shit out of me, and Seto had me sitting on needles with his fixation (hehe) on Jou in the beginning. How they manage and handle (or don't, depending on your view) is so well-described and realistic, it gives me goosebumps.
I love Jou. There's no other way to put it. He does actually fit as a cop, with his morals and so on.

The entire story has such a intruiging plot, is fantastically written, characters are perfect and it's just .. Grand! I love it!

I hope you soon conjure another chapter, I'm hooked!
Hope you find a house as well? :D


One bummer: I've noticed that you continually spell 'bored' as 'board' (almost, don't lynch me for missing one or two).

I just read the last four chapters!!! and I love this story even more!!! It makes you think about so many things and specially how one event can be look so different from different point of view! Someone can be evil for some people but to others he could have been an angel. Life is complicated, it can not be just black and white, someone said that there are different points of views, yours, mine and the truth, and each one of them is right!! Thank you so much for sharing!! Can wait to read the next chapter, I know Seto is very angry but I don't think it is going to be so easy for Jou to run away, don't think Seto is going to let him go so easily!! at least I hope so because I love this couple, they are made for each other!! and honey you kill me with... “The Seto Kaiba I fell in love with has been shaped by all of the experiences of his life, the good and bad. I don’t want part of the package, Seto, I want the whole thing. Power trips, ego, temper, traumatic issues, occasional moments of stupidity. I want all of it.” ... Don’t think Seto will be able to let go that kind of love!!!

I knew Mokuba was shot. XD

Yeah, Mokuba's one messed up kid. Meh, I've met some kids who are autustic and has Apserger's as well... and you're not too far off by his lack of empathy.

I hope Jou's going to be all right by himself. I really hate the Kaiba brothers right now for their blatant selfishness. Maybe Seto won't kill Jou.... yet. <_<