rate_review Reviews

How to describe such a good chapter while hopped up on cherry bloosms and coke? let me count the ways XD This really has feeling to it. Nice impact to it too. Someting is missing I'm not sure what. More Angst? emo? Just an element I can't place. Or it could be me trying to figureout how to pronouce all the strange names XD

OHHHH you needs to makes more ^_^

I love it!! it's sad but also very sweet! I can't wait for them to be back together again... please tell me poor Atemu isn't gonna have to go through all of these trails and stuff I don't think the poor guy can handle it!! lol anyway it's a great story and I hope you write more soon!

I'm glad that Atemu has realized what he needs to do, but will it be too little too late?

Brilliant story! Gosh I can't wait to see how Yami does with the Gods...so cool. I love that you are bringing the ancient gods of eygpt into play. Can't wait to read more.

Gasp... Poor Yugi. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Pretty good ^_^ Even without knowing the fandom it makes sence. Intresting too ^_^

oooh. :D This looks like it's going to get good. <33 More angst please~! ^-^

I really liked the way this story is starting...and poor Yugi...I look forward to seeing who he ends up with...Thank you for a good read and I look forward to the next chapter.

Poor Yugi...wonder who sent Yugi the package? I know that wasn't really Atemu talking to Yugi that way, just a voice in Yugi's head (you know what I mean...not like another person, just his head voicing its fears through Atemu's voice which Yugi is imagining he's hearing.) Wonder how they're going to go about fixing this, because lets fact it the only way that Yugi will truly get over this would be if he literally spoke to Atemu for real, and that isn't going to happen. His grandpa had better watch Yugi closely because Yugi might consider ending his life prematurely in the hopes of joining Atemu on the other side, as a way of showing Atemu that he DOES love him and he'd do anything to be with him.