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by DarkSynfulLegend

person TheGreatSetoKaiba
schedule November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What I saw looked pretty good, but I'd lay off of the use of "aibou" to mean partner. If you want to write a fanfiction in English, go the whole way. It doesn't matter if "aibou" is used in the show since it's never used in the dub.
person smint45
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was such a wonderful story!!! I absoloutly loved it!!!! Thank you for posting it!!!!
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I love that you added guest appearances by the ancient egyptian gods and goddesses. My best friend is very very very into Yu-Gi-Oh!. And she also makes it very hard to read fanfiction without finding some gap in logic somewhere. I did not have this problem with your story.

It was a pleasure!~
schedule October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
to Blaze Lupin - I'm not always fond of the other pairings of Yami/Hikari, however I do have a new one in the works and its going to be...lengthy for sure. Plenty of Atemu/Yuugi fluff, with angst, action adventure, romance and of course some intrigue.

To everyone who read. Thank you for sticking with me for this story and I hope you come back and read more of my work. it takes me awhile but it will get up there sometime.
person Selene89
schedule October 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awwww. So sweet. Are you going to write any side stories about the other yami/hikari?
person nari-chan
schedule October 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i loved it !
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out so sweat. I figured it would be a lot darker, but it turned out to be one of the cutest endings for the series I've ever read.
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for sharing!
person Yaminisu
schedule September 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice ending...
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a great gift! I would like to put that on my christmas list...lol. That was a really good chapter and I liked how innocent and wanton you made Yugi. Look forward to the last chapter.