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for Joey's unexpected surprise

by blackslayer14

person Traybell
schedule September 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a good start, Joey has his hand full with moneybags. Good luck with ya G.E.D, this should help improve your writing as well as open other doors for you.
schedule September 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I dont wanna be mean but you need a grammer check your fanfiction before posting it. Other than that it looks good ^^