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for Source of Eternal Frustration

by GudenMulle

person Jiggary
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
De-lic-ious!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More!!!
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see a sequel. This was really good.
person aliceintheWonderland
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey i really loved this =) You got both Kaiba and Jou's charcters totally spot on which can be difficult in yaoi. I really liked the way Kaiba was all i can do what i want because i own you, that totally fits his attitude and how i see him and Jou's relationship.
Really hope you do write a sequel =D
xx
person YACUMO
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You should not ask about it!!! JUST DO IT LOL!!!
Awesome beginning and contiue it!!!
schedule June 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loved it !!!!
person Anon
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
yes please!!!

This has too much potential to simply stay as a oneshot!
hot.....steamy.....pent up sexual tention...it demands follow-up chapters





pretty please?
person LadyWolf
schedule June 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You must continue!! Kaiba can't be all bad....can he?

I hope not

post soon!