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for Source of Eternal Frustration

by GudenMulle

person summer
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very well writing. keep going have more faith in yoursealf because your doing a great job so far. UPDATE SOON!
person HikanDas
schedule June 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This great so far, please keep going. I can't wait to read more to see what happens. ^^
Also I can't believe Tristan ditched Joey because of a bet LOL
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was an evil place to stop lol more please
person Maggiemay
schedule June 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am amused and intrigued. Keep it up!!!
person Kiki
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, there's no need to be nervy, it was fantastic!!!
I just see Joey's face before me, when he imitated Kaiba 'Because I can' :D Brilliant
And at the end Honda's action... I love you! Update soon!
person firelilly
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahahaha oh goodness it's funny. Please tell me you are going to write more. I love the conflict you have between Jou and Seto. I love it really great work.
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Honey, I kill you if you don't keep writing this story!!! hahaha I am joking! Thanks so much for sharing it, it is a great story, you don't have nothing to worry about and I think a lot of fans would agree with me, I love the story, so please keep writing!!! *puppy eyes* I want to know what will happen next hehehe it was nice to see that Seto was jelous of Honda, that would be interesting hehehe take care ok, thanks for sharing it again and don't worry, remember that the first person who must be happy with your stories is yourself!
person shareefah
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your doing a great job on your story. don't give up keep going. update soon!
person tash1021
schedule June 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!! HOT HOT HOT!!!
this story is hot please continue
person Kiki
schedule June 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Hot Hot Hot!
I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!