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August 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Favorite line of a Yugioh fic ever "I fucking like you, you asshole" I don't think I have ever laughed so much at a one liner in a fic. Great story so far~
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August 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story was really good i wished it was longer and didnt end but it was great!!=]
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July 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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Lovely, lovely first effort indeed. You had me grinning the whole time, leaping from one chapter to the next until--alas, the last one! I must say, though, it certainly didn't end without promise. I'm definitely looking forward to a chapter that peels back just a little bit of that icy cold bastard exterior. After all he's been put through, I'm sure Jou wouldn't mind it either, and I'm a huge sucker for when the big-bad-top gives in to handing out some tenderness.
Keep it up, I'll keep an eye out.
~Dagger
Lovely, lovely first effort indeed. You had me grinning the whole time, leaping from one chapter to the next until--alas, the last one! I must say, though, it certainly didn't end without promise. I'm definitely looking forward to a chapter that peels back just a little bit of that icy cold bastard exterior. After all he's been put through, I'm sure Jou wouldn't mind it either, and I'm a huge sucker for when the big-bad-top gives in to handing out some tenderness.
Keep it up, I'll keep an eye out.
~Dagger
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July 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it, love it, love it!. Great story and wonderful chapter!!! Keep the good work honey, the cliff was eviiiiiiiiiiiiil hahahaha but I love it, can't wait for the next chapter, the story is getting better and better, something that I like a lot is that Jou was very honest from the beginning, our beloved puppy needs tons of love not just sex and even if the neko doesn't want to admit it, he needs some puppy love too, no one would ever love him as Jou and looks like he is starting to see that! Thanks for sharing!
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My god. It's about time for someone to bring the good old days back again. I LOOOOOOOOOOve this story. You are really talented in story telling and I'm loving it when youre telling my favorite story. A Jou/Seto story. I'm just loving it. Your seto is to die for and jou is so consumed by him, It just gives me chills. PLz I read all 5 chapters together. You keep this up and you may end up having some loyal fans out here.
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July 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the tension and drama. Great job, I love this turbulent relationship.
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July 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"It was clear disobedience. It would have to be corrected."
Heh. I do like the sound of that. XD
Thx for the update, still love the story! <3
And... I almost asked about the Bakura/Jou thing, thx for clearing that up in advance. ^^;;
Heh. I do like the sound of that. XD
Thx for the update, still love the story! <3
And... I almost asked about the Bakura/Jou thing, thx for clearing that up in advance. ^^;;
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July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please continue, it's such a nice story it is more than a one shot.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! The tension in this story is great.
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July 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, your story is AMAZING. Second off, if where you're typing allows it you press 'ctrl' and 'I' at the same time to italicize, 'ctrl' and 'B' at the same time to bold and 'ctrl' and 'U' to underline~
I hopes this helps and may your muse never lose its fire!
I hopes this helps and may your muse never lose its fire!