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keep going! Seto's probably pretty pissed his mark is missing. lol.

When I started reading this, it came up as only two chapters (hence my above review) Imagine my surprise when I saw there were more! Then at the end, I was saddened to see you are having writers block. Hmm and with Seto on the doorstep?? Where will it go? Will he confess some kind of feeling to Jou? Will he perhaps deny any feelings but apologize for ruining Jou's first time? Will he simply slam Jou against the wall and have his way with him again, then perhaps stay with Jou rather than walk away? Will he make a snarky comment about Jou eating corn from a can??? :) good luck hon. Your story telling is good, and your writing has improved in drastic leaps since the first chapter. Congrats.

Fantastic so far.

You know, after all the chasing and such by Kaiba I wonder if Jou would go on the offensive ... the saying is the best defense is a good offence ... and maybe he'd turn it around and actually catch Kaiba a bit off guard with the change up and possibly explain that he (Jou) doesn't bottom for anyone and then make Seto the submissive when things finally happen. It would be nice to see his actually get the upper hand when all is said and done.

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It would seem you have your own source of frustartion, get it Ha-ha. Damn I've got to stop it with these puns, anyway heres an advice from one writer to another if you got a block mught i suggest you read or watch some yaoi. Typically I listen to a song that reflects my story mood and the chapter I'm trying to write, just a suggestion TUY.

Please write more! This is amazing! I wanna see what happens!!

Hi, i love your Story. The things Jou said to kaiba made me cry *sniff* It was so...sweet. *cries more* I dont know why some ppl dont like Replys to Comments or such things. I think its important to communicate with people XD

I hope your writers block will get away, i would love to read a new chapter. Such a cliffhanger....he opens the door and theres kaiba *kyaaaaaaaaaa* *too much for my Fangirl heart*
Thanks for your story ^^ I love how you write *grin*

an idea to future chapters since you ended it with "Kaiba, at his front doorstep". Is Jou asking him a question (like "whadda ya here for moneybags?") and Kaiba replies from here with a question of his own ^^

OMG I LOVE IT! this story is really good. I like the plot and it's a really good story so far. Plz add more soon!

I love this story. I hope you keep going

I just want to say that I like this story very much :D Please keep up the good work