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for Source of Eternal Frustration

by GudenMulle

person 1enchantedgirl
schedule May 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
U r killing me here! I am enjoying your story. I do hope u finish it before I turn 60. In the meantime I will try to find some of your other work. And I give u bonus props for being so meticulous in your work that your beta doesn't need to sub it out! Really good job. I loved that whole hickey scrubbing scene, I'm going to commit that to memory!
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I loved the cat and mouse game. I would like to see how their awkward but super cute relationship develops.
schedule November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very lovely to read and please update.
schedule October 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
heh, that's brilliant. I love those two, betting on the outcome.
schedule October 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I am just leaving a friendly comment saying how much I love this story!!! I look forward to what type of date the first date will be and how Kaiba's possessive and jerky personality will play out in the relationship. I just love Joey when he is spunky and strong willed, but is still the submissive in the relationship.

P.S. I am sending you and email to request that you put me on your notifier list, so please make sure you check that email!
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!! More illicit school fun! First, the corn out of the can was a great, specific detail that stuck in my head. A million descriptions of small studios wouldn't manage to create quite the same vivid setting that the can of corn did. Also, Kaiba groping Jou while trying to lay down ground rules for public displays of affection was funny. I wonder how long he'll be able to control himself.

Thanks for the updates! I suppose one advantage to updating every year is that your poor readers HAVE to go back and re-read that first bathroom scene all over again. (As if I needed an excuse:) Can't wait for more--unless I have to wait for more, then I will, but sadly.
person lo
schedule September 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see that this story still lives. I have a lot of fun reading this, thanks.
person JulieNyu
schedule September 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! I'm looking forward to an update!
person Luca
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My heart nearly stopped when I saw that this was updated and the hiatus was over! I adore this story and adore you even more for continuing it! <3 Keep it up. I love how Jou's ever the hothead and Kaiba's just plain amusing.
person Leikaru
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It would be super fan-fucking-tastic if this was continued =3