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for Retrieving Destiny

by Jeanne

schedule March 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I can't believe I almost missed this awesome story!! Thank the Gods my sis told about it, I love it!! Your writing is amazing and you are my new favorite person because you added SethxJouxSeto goodness in it (which is so hard to find >.<)
I'm going to read the sequel right now~ (and I added the story to my FF.net favs too xD)
schedule December 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
"the two yami had been assigned folding duty and were forbidden from touching any of the machinery. This stemmed from a certain incident regarding two toasters, an Electric Lizard, the Shadow Realm, and the fire department." *reader pauses at this time to howl with laughter* That...was PERFECTLY in tune with Marik and Bakura's personalities.

I just came across your fic in all of its awesomeness - I can't imagine how I missed it for so long!! This was a perfect New Year's Day treat for me - except for the fact that you said there's only 23 chapters, and your last chapter is a terrible cliffhanger! Please, please tell me you're going to do a sequel. PLEASE? With cookies and candy and chocolate-covered yamis on top?
person smint45
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is so fantastic!!! I absoloutly love this story!!!! I really hope that you will not end it here!!! Just when we meet the reincarnation for the evil magican(I think it is him at least)!!!! I really want more it would be so nice if they could save their race this time and if perhap they meet others of their race!!!! I really would like that!!!! I really hope to see you again!!!!
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, I've eaten all these chapters in like.. 2 hours!! Moooooore please :P
I love this idea :P. I especially love the wings :D But I have to admit that my favourite pairing in this crazy story is SethJouSeto. What's NOT to love, seriously?! I LOVE SetoJou, and adding in another Seto (Seth) dosen't really make it any worse y'know :P. Could you write like, some extra one-shots about those three? Not neccesarily sex, but interaction is fantastic entertainment as well! Something with Seth & Seto ganging up on poor Jou :D
Another thing I like is that there are mXm, mXf and fXf. Sometimes the stoies ends up all maleXmale, and variarity is good. (I can't spell to save my life, sorry..).
Summing up: Love it, MORE SethJouSeto, love it AND I am looking forward to the next chapter! ;D
schedule September 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oooh i cant wait for more!!
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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schedule September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ryou is going to take control! Yummy! Good chapter. Be waiting for the next one.
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just read this story. I like it so far. Be waiting for the next chapter, can't wait to see Ryou get teased some more.
schedule September 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*faceplants* aww man I was all ready for some Bakura/Ryou action *pouts* They're my favorite!! lol anyway this story just keeps getting better and better. Plz update soon!
schedule September 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story! One of the best ones I've ever read and it has a very unique plot. Can't wait to get to the Ryou/Bakura next chapter cause I love them!! *huggles cute bishies* Please keep writing and updating and I can't wait to see what happens next!