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for We build and then we break

by YuugiMutou

schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It means that you're my bitch! hahaha!
schedule January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the story from beginning till the end! And yes, you are more than welcome to rewrite the lemon... anytime... *wink wink*

Thanks for writing this entertaining story!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"This place looked as if it had raided a garage sale." haha!

I absolutely adore how you characterized Yuugi, and how he's having Bud Light, and the whole idea of Yami leading what seems like an ordinary life in a body of his own back in Domino. This is written brilliantly, can't wait to read more!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Arg! This is so good! I'm rating this a hundred stars! Or plusses, actually!
schedule January 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"...fighting in a battle of never ending dominance. Neither would give up, as they were the king of games."

I LOVE you for coming up with that.
schedule August 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
D: Nuuuuuu! *speechless* nuuuuuu!
schedule July 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm very intrigued. I would like to see what happens next.
schedule July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I wonder if it's going to last this time. Baka Pharaoh! he had no room to talk when he'd done the same thing himself. What a hypocrite! GAH! boys! getting them to talk about their feelings is about as hard as pulling teeth without Novocaine! Good thing Yugi had a bit more sense.
schedule July 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*pulls hair in aggravation* ARGH! And they had been doing so well!!!!! Stupid Seto. *kicks*
schedule June 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa the suspense... and poor Yami finding that out like that. That sort of sucks but I love it. Thank you for a great read.