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Yay! Now what will happen next?! I like what these dark sides like to do most times :)

Hi! While I must admit to being disappointed about how weak Yami is and how sinister, taking-advantage-of-a-raped-person Atemu is, I must say, this is, however short, very well written! Despite my aforementioned hang-ups, it really draws you in and makes you ask, "Why did Yugi throw him out? Who told Seto that Yami had said something about their relationship and how did that person know? What will Atemu do to Yami and what retribution will he wreak on those that hurt him?"
Oh, please continue! There are SO FEW stories being written anymore, and fewer good ones. Keep it up, please!
-Raye

WOW! Would it be pushie to request MORE! This story is going to be good. I can't wait to read more. Thank you a good read.

First time I've read or even contemplated this pairing. XD
Looking forward to see how you describe the differences between what should really be two versions of the same soul.
I mean, Yami *should* be a lot different from Atemu; sealed in the puzzle for three frickin millenia, robbed of his memories and stranded in modern day Japan, that must change a person. Plus, he's done and seen a lot that would change his outlook on life, his way of thinking.
And a long comes Atemu, taught that he's a god walking the earth, born to rule and equipped with powerful magic.

Nice concept, make it work! =)
~jea