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for Mokuba's Secret

by BarbaraAnnClay

schedule April 8, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Always a beautiful story. One of my top favorite fics. I could definitely see Seto react that way. Their father was a bastard. I wish it was real what he did to him. Just read it and see. Usually I'm against death in a fanfic but here it works. Great job! Just wish I could get rid of those damn diamonds. 

schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, this story is really good thnk you for putting it on. I can't wait to read more.
schedule May 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love the drama. Can't wait to see how Seto deals with this.
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those chapter were great! I can't wait for the rest. I feel so bad for both sides. Great story! Thank you!
schedule May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. And I really hope that Sate gets his head together. Thank you for a brilliant story.
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. An interesting take. Your writing is getting very good. This story promises to be a very sophisticated and with the way you are evolving as a writer, I look forward to more.
schedule May 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Would it be too much to ask for chapter six to be put up as fast as possible? I am so looking forward to seeing how the talk goes with Seto and Mokuba.