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for The Power Of Love

by BarbaraAnnClay

person maggiemay
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi, thanks for the story.

I've read a few of your stories and the ideas are very nice. It's interesting how your stories flow. The way you write your stories is very similar to the way I write chapter outlines and plot points. Those are my framework for the story and things I want to bring out - then I fill it in with background, emotions, reactions, and description. Reading your stories is like reading my story framework. I love the way your stories flow - sort of choppy, but with a rhythm without an overdose of detail.

Keep up the good work.

Maggiemay
person YamiKuro
schedule May 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this! more please!