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April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so they found Joey's sister, that poor family can't cut a break anywhere. I am looking forward to the weddings. By the way, now that healing is being done with both Joey and his sister, is his sister going to hook up with Bakara? I guess I will have to wait for more of your chapters. Well, I guess I will have to be patient. Thank you for very good chapters and I look forward to more.
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April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, poor joey and seto can't cut a break can they? Can't wait to see how this new wrinkle pans out.
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that was really cool. Really this story is going to get very interesting when the fight for Joey's mind really begins. Can't wait to read that fight and I really like that you put more than one chapter on, it really does spoil we readers.
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April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good story, I can't wait to see more of the healing that is going to happen with Joey. Really am enjoying your story.
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joesph. Wow, that boy has had it rough. I can't wait to see how you make the chapters about his healing process. What that poor thing went through I am surprised that he is alive. You made the story graphic without too much. I really feel for the character and that is a sign of a good author. Thank you for a great first seven chapters and I can't wait to read more.
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how this story has begun. I really hope that you continue with it. I would love to see where you take two of my fav charators :)
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April 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great start. I can't wait for Joey's father to get what is coming to him. Thank you for a great story.