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May 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I think your writing is really good and would like to see more of the story so hope you might return to it.
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June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This really good so far. I'll admit it took a moment or two for me to wrap my head around the concept; there really aren't a lot of S&M fics out there where the dom is so nice right on the spot like this one (Then again thats how Atem usually is heh) and I admit that I was a bit confused at parts such as Goriean tidbits seeing as I have never heard of it, but thats what context clues are for. lol Either way I look forward to the next chapter :3
Fizzy
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January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Um... this might sound awkward... but are you purposely doing thr 'Y/you's and 'i's? Meaning that 'Y/you' is respectful for both Doms and subs and 'i' because you're a sub, or am I WAY into this BDSM fic?
This is a really good fic! I'm enjoying every moment of it! When I was at the last part of chapter 3, I was like, what, no chapter? You've got to be kidding me!
This is a really good fic! I'm enjoying every moment of it! When I was at the last part of chapter 3, I was like, what, no chapter? You've got to be kidding me!
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is an amazing story. I must commend you not many authors have the guts to write a story so closly baised on their personal life. You had me hooked after reading the first chapter I greatly looked forward to reading more
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December 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always. your story is interesting to me....do you know a website that has the rules you use in the story? I'm very interested in your story...I've written alot about slaves, but i always use the BEST system with the one sub I ever had. And that was truthfully more casual than anything, she ended up leaving after about a month....
Well anyway! I love your story! Nice job!
Well anyway! I love your story! Nice job!
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December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I find myself looking forward to your next chapter. I hope to hear from you again, soon.
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December 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I am so glad that you explain aspects which are not common knowledge and you haven't jumped Yami and Yugi into the bed. I like that you are having a get to know each other phase. Look forward to the next chapter.
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April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it. Its nice to see Jounouchi as a bad guy for once! ^_^
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April 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's great to finally read about BDSM from someone who actually does it. *get's frustrated with people who make it up* I look forward to reading the rest of this, it looks to be a very interesting read!
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April 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful!!! Its so nice to see someone writing about BDSM!!! I'm actually the Dom. in my own relationship, its great to see someone writing about a very interesting lifestyle. Keep up the great work!!!