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March 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. You have a talent, this is the first time in a while I have looked at Yu-gi-oh fanfiction and you have got me hook, I read all the chapters in a single sitting! Now its past eleven, I'm hungry as I have ever been and the lowwer half of my body is asleep! You have some talent! Makes me want to get back into the writing game so that hopefully someone will think of my stories are crack in the form of words! Keep up the amazing work!
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February 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story i would love it if you appealed to some of the artists on aff to draw some of kat's outfits. mainly the blue one that would rock. cant wait until you update again
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February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, i so want to know what Honda's problem is. I cam't wait for more. I've benn checking daily for up dates.
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February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awasome im glad that seto likes the room . i was worried their for a minue . well please update soon .
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading lace for a while, I started when chapter 4 came out, and I've been waiting. It's now chapter 13 and I must say it's a very interesting story. I like that Jounouchi and Seto aren't the only one in a gay relationship. Yugi and Ryou's relationship really made it more balanced. The fetish of the Uke's dressing as girls was a very nice touch, especially seeing as you didn't make them hardcore Drag queen [Not that there anything wrong] You put them in a nice in between.
I will say that Jounouchi's reaction to seeing his sister was a little unemotional. I wasn't expecting him to scream and faint like a fangirl, but maybe a bit more emotion.
I rate this story 5/5 stars.
I will say that Jounouchi's reaction to seeing his sister was a little unemotional. I wasn't expecting him to scream and faint like a fangirl, but maybe a bit more emotion.
I rate this story 5/5 stars.
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January 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I found myself wandering aroud the Yugioh area, just becoming a fan when I found this story, i was so captivated that I read 13 chapters in one sitting. 4 hours later it had become a favorite. please update soon.
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January 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved it
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
amazing update cant wait till u update again
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this story sounds interesting and I love the plot.
Hon, some constructive criticism from one fanfic author reader to another, it is much easier to read a fic that is written in the past tense than in present tense. If you are not a native English speaker you might consider asking someone for help in putting the stories in a past tense format instead of present tense just to make the stories easier to read.
To reitterate, I do love the fic so far.
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Hon, some constructive criticism from one fanfic author reader to another, it is much easier to read a fic that is written in the past tense than in present tense. If you are not a native English speaker you might consider asking someone for help in putting the stories in a past tense format instead of present tense just to make the stories easier to read.
To reitterate, I do love the fic so far.
mofaf1
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November 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL XD Next time you should have Joey take a shit in Kaiba's Cheerios when he wakes up. He's a bad dog :3