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by Sands4488

schedule April 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok Seto's actions STILL aren't making any kind of sense, although I sense a possible motive with the whole Jou refusing to tell anyone thing. And Haruhi doesn't seem like a bullying, blackmailing bitch who forced Kaiba to marry her... at least not yet anyway. ... possibly she was an arranged marriage between the two families back when they were kids? GAH I want to KNOW!!!!! Oooooh I hope the next chapter comes soon!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
At the same time, you can't really hate Haru for wanting to be with Seto, specially since she doesn't act bitchy with him and tries to be noce to Mokuba.

You just feel sad for Jou who waited three years for Seto, and can only love him.

Still a really good story! I love it!
person maggiemay
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah I enjoyed Tied Together very much. I am enjoying this in a very dark, twisted sort of way. But being ME I have to try to figure out what is actually going on.

Seto is actually fond of Haruhi but at no time does he act as a lover or new husband. Most new husbands are bursting with pride "MY WIFE" type statements especially to friends. He didn't want to introduce her to the guys - and as Seto knows Jou hasn't discussed their relationship with them there is another reason. Like perhaps the arrangement is temporary? Maybe a way to get her away from her family?

Seto returned 'home' to his seat of power. To me this is significant. In the U.S. he was a foreigner and as such automatically suspicious. A successful Japanese foreigner is doubly suspicious, besides that he really didn't have legal rights or any kind of true power. There is something he wants to achieve and needs his seat of power. He also starts to tell Yugi that "It's not what.." That is a very telling statement. He has some plan afoot.

Haruhi mentions friends and family. It was discussed that her father worked with/knew Gozobura - At a time when Seto was growing up yet Seto didn't come to Kaiba until he was eight or ten I believe. The fact that she has a Japanese name while she was born and raised by an 'american' family is very interesting. Her description is VERY distinctive - auburn hair and blue eyes. I don't recall that her age was mentioned, but I'm betting she is the same age as Seto...

Okay those are my guesses! I tried not to spoil it and you probably won't give me a right or wrong answer... but I wanted you to know what I'd picked up so far - tell me if I missed more and am totally off the track and look for more clues.

Maggiemay
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! *\O/* SWEEEEEET! and HOT as hell! ^_^ loved loved LOVED it!
person sugar
schedule April 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update when u get a chance I can't wait for more chapters to come !!!! :D
schedule April 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! what the hell happened?! things were going so well and then *BOOOOOM!* sheesh! I need more info here, and I'm going to beat Kaiba, and possibly Haruhi senseless. update PLEASE!!!!
schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Completely cruel and dark, I love Angst :D