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I think the portrayal of Kaiba is kind of off. He's rigid, but not snappy. I think you should try watching more of the Kaiba-centric episodes and then when you want Kaiba to say something, visualize him saying it in your head. If it sounds out of character, then don't do it unless it's done for the sake of humor. That part was more intimidating than it was funny.

loved the ending :)

Very cute. I loved the end. Usually its Yugi being characterised as the sweet one. Poor Yami. But i don't think there's any doubt that he would go after Yugi to the kitchen, now he knows how he feels... ;) Awesome story!

Cute! Seto has a mean streak in him a mile wide. Thank you for a good story.

Awe so Mokuba turned out to the one who really helped. Awesome! I'm interested in seeing what Yugi has in store for the "others". As well as why Yugi, would be asking for the info he was looking for.

That...Was...Brilliant. Can't wait to see whats going to come next, (mainly I'm looking forward to Yami finding out whats going on. (I say that the only one who isn't a dead man is Joey, since he didn't contradict Yami.) Update soon.

That was one of the sweetest and funniest chapters I've read in quite a while! couldn't stop laughing and giggling all the the way from start to finish. I honestly think there will no longer be coffee served in the Ishtar household. And where did that spider "idea" come from? Boss-Spider? Priceless!Poor lovable,hug gable, Malik, having to listen to everything from the closet where he was locked to be "kept safe". Loved it. Can`t wait to see what you come up with in the next chapter! Hurry,hurry,please.

why do I get the feeling that Yugi is asking this question for a school project for a class that his other friends aren't taking with him where you have to take note of how people are reacting to what you do or ask. (My friend had to do that once for a course she took, where she had a friend hook up a dog leash to her shirt and they went to a department store and wandered around with my friend holding the leash and they were acting like she was a dog and they took note of how people were reacting.) Wonder who's up next...and will anyone give Yugi the honest answer...and how will Yami react when he finds out about the others being asked, and the responeses they're giving. Update soon.

I'm not sure mom had the same image when she told me the story ;-). Thank you for this chapter (I'm still smiling).

LOL! Neat chapter! C ya!