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July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this one. It is sweet and soft and thinks of a possibility that came to my minde only by reading it. Both getting their bodies back ... as normal beings not some kind of spirit. Keep up the good work because I wouldn't mind to read more of your's.
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May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooove it! It's beautiful!
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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!!!!! This inspired a whole new look on The Thief King for me...kudos!!!
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November 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful story, very emotional. I really enjoyed reading this work. It was interesting to read Bakura's thoughts about his return and the regrets he had. My only complaint is that this could have been expanded a little more, maybe a couple of chapters dealing with Bakura's and Ryou's new realtionship ;)
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November 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love this, it's beautiful!!!!
it's jumpy and sketchy, but it's 1st person and considering the situation, of course the thief king'd be confused. i love that not only do we get his eloquence and possessiveness, but also his protectiveness and devotion even through his confusion. i would love to see more of this!
that and the image of them sleeping like that is stuck in my head... may possibly even be drawn. sometime.... maybe. (i hope the thief cleaned up a bit first!^-^)
it's jumpy and sketchy, but it's 1st person and considering the situation, of course the thief king'd be confused. i love that not only do we get his eloquence and possessiveness, but also his protectiveness and devotion even through his confusion. i would love to see more of this!
that and the image of them sleeping like that is stuck in my head... may possibly even be drawn. sometime.... maybe. (i hope the thief cleaned up a bit first!^-^)
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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. It seems very right for them, and I like the way you handled Ryou's character. Really quite excellent.
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February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SWEET! Fantastic read from beginning to end! The different reactions to the Pharaoh's return and the Thief King's is most noticeable in how Ryou was the only one even looking at the thief, while everyone else focus is on the pharaoh. Ryou is the only one who cares what becomes of the thief, and is also not willing to doubt his own feelings or need for him. I loved it!
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Ryou, you stand up to Yami!
I enjoyed this immensly :)
Love,
Kuro
I enjoyed this immensly :)
Love,
Kuro
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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There was a few spelling errors in this that sometimes made me have to pause and reread the sentence, but otherwise, I love this. :3 It was very cute and well-written. I also think it deserves more than one review. xD
I look forward to reading more of your stuff! :D
~Cecilia
I look forward to reading more of your stuff! :D
~Cecilia
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. One of the best stories were the yamis come back I've read