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by Jadelioness

schedule August 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great chapter. It was very good.
person ani
schedule February 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure what i liked better, the initial voyeurism, or the fact Bakura actually asked, almost begged for Ryou to play along. it's so rare to see Bakura not the rat-assed bastard, especially after what Ryou overheard; almost as rare as Ryou just giving in to his desires where Bakura's involved.

not to mention the simple fact that Bakura was in love first!!! that's the best part!
schedule January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice second chapter. Wonderful all around but that was my favorite.
Bravo to you.
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lucky Ryou. I bet he's even forgotten he's meeting Yugi and Malik.
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hot. As. HELL! dear gods you know how to do a LOT with a short lemon! kudos!
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very nice ;D loved it!
schedule January 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SO sexy! Ryou is far more coherent than I would have been if Bakura grabbed me with that wicked smirk, all I could have managed would be an 'eeep!"
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Poor Ryou is going to be late for one of the best reasons he can probably tink of..hot,sexy Bakura in his bed.