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by nikki7716

schedule February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no need to guess that that agreement's going to cause some angst
person Anon
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I don't think I've ever read anything so brutal about Ryou and Bakura...Poor Ryou, he seems so dead inside! Please update! I need to know what happens!
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Dies happily* Sexy Stockholm Sadism! And...more... breath play... Awww damnit! *censored activities with wife*

*Points up accusingly* You see what you've done?! All your fault! ... and my wife says she likes you... (^_^ quite a bit, that's twice you've done this to her now. Thanks!) You know, if you don't start warning me about breath play, it's gonna get me in trouble one of these days. Because one day I'll end up interrupting (she means 'Ravishing') my wife when she's actually doing something important (not likely), and even if she gives in at the time (I will, I'm a Scorpio.:P), afterwards, she'll get miffed about the distraction (highly doubtful), which might result in a limitation on internet time (that's possible, she spends too much time online.)... or just more time in bed (highly more probable)... but either way it will be All. Your. Fault! (This is true) So you just think about that while I go back and read this chapter again young lady! (And I will too because I want to see what keeps putting her in such a good mood, even if I don't know anything about fanfiction or Yugioh. But I don't think that will keep me from enjoying a good story. ^_~)



As for my story, it's gonna be a long one shot. I have written the beginning and the start of the middle, as well as the very last part of the end, so I just have the middle and rest of the end to muddle through and finish and they are being stubborn!


[Bakura's just too ideal for sadism to pass up!] Yes, yes he is... the damn sexy bastard!
schedule January 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hmmm, wonder if he's developing Stockholm...
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh finally. Reyou's mind is so messed up with confusion and awkwardness that he no longer knows Bakura is an Angel or a devil. That was so sad to know he longs to be raped by Bakura. A physical relationship that for him it can mean more.To be close to him and to be his subject of amusement is good enough as long as it get Bakura to be with him.I was reading this poem the other day about a girl who is jealous of her lover's tattoos. To her they are so permanent and immortal that makes her fell insecure and lonely. I think of Reyou the same way. As if he wants those scars and those pain on his body.The token of Bakura's twisted and perverted love. OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH I just love this. Please please please I'll check this website every hour of every day if it'll inspire you to write.I'll write you a poem and send it to you if I'll see the end of this. Please make it bloody and painful. God I just love sadism.
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is SO not good... RUN YUGI, RUN! *Cuddles Ryou* I know I always come swooping in to rescue you from evil Bakura, but I just... I CAN'T this time! For some reason I am unable to hate him and want him dead just yet. Give it a few more chapters... if you can stay alive that long. This is quite possibly the most sadistic Bakura fic I have ever read, and I REALLY REALLY like it!


And seriously Sweety, some aspects of our two stories are very similar. I wish I could email you parts of it just so we can compare notes!
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ry, he's so screwed in the head now. lol

Baku is such an a$$, but such a smexy a$$.

Microbiology has all day class/lab every Tues and Thursday.. eww.
Most of the grade is lab, not the final and midterm exams. O.o Loads of studying, which I'm already behind. :P

Ancient Art History should be alright, mostly discussion boards at two a week, and a chapter or two of reading and research a week. I bought a sketch pad and some coals and have been drawing lately. (lol.. it's on DA or Y gal under the same name.)
I like those fluffy classes. lOL About time I got one.

Glad you're liking you're new semester, my last one was hell too. I was speaking with a friend from the Netherlands, she just has to take the classes pertaining to her major. Only in the states do we force that whole 'well rounded education' theory. GRR,.. lucky dog.
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! This is like a severely kinkier version of a story I've been writing, and damn if you didn't give me ideas for it! Love it! Truly! But my characters will not be thinking you for putting me in this sadistic mood.
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hoooooooooooooooooooooooooolyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy shit! MY GoD That was twisted. I couldn't breath until he was done. My god call me crazy but Bakura is hooooooooooooooooot. I mean it's just the way he is. e messes with Reyou's heart more than his body. Poor reyou. I mean he has no choice but to love his nightmares. I think I'll stop reading any other stories. Nothing could ever come even close to this. I\m a big fan of Bakura yet no one shows his true colors like you do. He is a very difficult character to describe he is definitely the devil. Still he is hurt himself as well. Please please please update faster if you can I'll die till the next chapter. I'll make sure to have a couple of tranquillizers before I start or I might end up fainted on my chair.
schedule January 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WOW,shudder* That hawt man stay in the ring. lol If i ever get one, I'm locking it up. lol

This semester will be Micro and art . ; Hope yours is better.lol