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November 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now this is the way the abuse fics are supposed to be written! i just hate all the random acts that most people write.
i love how well the pain and torment comes across, especially with it being 1st POV. people don't realize how hard it is sometimes. and i gotta say i love the torturing yugi chapter; for the target of so many enemies he should have taken a hellova lot more. the whole show would have been so much better with alittle more physical violence.
how sick is it to say i wish there was more? something with yami, more to fill the gap between yugi showing up and the final shadow game, or even expanding on ryou confronting the others afterwards. i've never seen a good one that has ryou actually fighting against the geek squad and saying that he's happy in their relationship, telling them to fuck off!
i love how well the pain and torment comes across, especially with it being 1st POV. people don't realize how hard it is sometimes. and i gotta say i love the torturing yugi chapter; for the target of so many enemies he should have taken a hellova lot more. the whole show would have been so much better with alittle more physical violence.
how sick is it to say i wish there was more? something with yami, more to fill the gap between yugi showing up and the final shadow game, or even expanding on ryou confronting the others afterwards. i've never seen a good one that has ryou actually fighting against the geek squad and saying that he's happy in their relationship, telling them to fuck off!
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May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, wow. That was a creepy ending but I liked it! It was all twisted and, and... twisted. XD Obviously I'm a master of words. But yes, it was just great. O:
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April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no one should complain about the wait between chapters... you turned and hit us with a crazy awesome ending
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March 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eep, this is so twisted. XD I love it~
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GOD! This chapter was hawt. Not just hot. Hawt. WHich is like...hot to the 1000000000000000th degree! :3
I loved it, and am looking very, very forward to more...
(can he do it Mariku? Please?)
Love,
Kuro
I loved it, and am looking very, very forward to more...
(can he do it Mariku? Please?)
Love,
Kuro
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ok, wow. lol
Ryou is going into that whole Stolkholm syndrome where he loves and needs the ones who owns him and makes his life hell. lol
Totally Wak! and Hawt1 I'm a sick puppy. lol
at least your writing is still going strong, another great update. i can't wait for another one shot. lol.
Ryou is going into that whole Stolkholm syndrome where he loves and needs the ones who owns him and makes his life hell. lol
Totally Wak! and Hawt1 I'm a sick puppy. lol
at least your writing is still going strong, another great update. i can't wait for another one shot. lol.
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March 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor Yugi, like the kid doesn't enough problems...and I wonder how Ryou's gonna feel once the high from the situation has worn off
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February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!! SHYAHH! Go RYou! Love Bakura!
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February 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My god this the best example of obsessive love at its best. Ryou can no longer make sense. He has lost his logic and morality completely. I have given up on guessing where this is going to end. Whatever you decide, I'm just at daze... You can just do it.. Nothings gonna shock me now. You might kill Yugi or make ryou kill both bakura or Yugi or Bakura and ryou might commit suicide or I just don't know. Right now, I'm at daze!!!!
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February 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More my lovely, i beg you!
Kuro
Kuro