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January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow is all ihave to say i wish it you wrote some more or another stroy like this, i love it and i wish that you could make something like it ^^, Love it to death i could.
schedule
January 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I haven't seen many het MOBC stories on here and this was quite refreshing. I would recommend splitting some of the parts into paragraphs to make the read a bit easier, but otherwise pretty good. Quite the colourful background also.