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by ScarlettRose

schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm all for the constructive use of time! Have a review! XD Ah~ Bakura is so manly, saving his little Ryou like that. I like how you got them to confess to one another, it was really sweet! As one of many fangirls I am part of the PRO-Removal-of-sleeping-bags-by-hot-and/or-sexy-Egyptians-for-the-sake-of-possible-future-foursomes Committee~~
person Roxas13
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The next time my boyfriend sleeps over and spoons me like this... I'm going to have te most goofiest grin on me face and even start giggling. And he's gonna be wondering what the heck I'm giggling like a ninny about.

"Oh just the sheer thouhght of Bakura spooning Ryou in a tighly confined space of a single person sleeping bag thats just too cute for words."

XD Actually.... not a bad idea. lol.

Make doubly sure that pitchfork-resistant sheild is packin it! Mwahahahaha.... "FIRE ZE PITCHFORKS" (yes dat was 'Ze end of ze world' ref. there) XD
schedule January 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEeeeeeeeeeee I lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove this fic!!!! xD I havent read a YuGiOh fic in sooooooooo long!! but I'm soo glad I read yours first! ^___^ You have written this story so very well! And their characteristics..SPOT ON! *giggles* This story makes me all giddy inside and reminds me of when I was in middle school *sighs* You know..you've really inspired me to write a YuGiOh fic of my own again!! Yayyyyy you're awesome! x] You should be happy, you're my new muse! teehee well, I'm off to start my own fic~ OH!! AND YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON!!!!^___^ pwease?!

<3<3<3
person YamiKuro
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i reviewed this on ff.net. XD

I love it. More.
person YamiKuro
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter, and that tease of BakuraRyou is mean XDDD
person Roxas13
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YOU are the OPTIOME of EBIL!!! *raises pitchfolk* A rare tender heating moment and you had to cut it off RIGHT there... >.< I demand MORE.. more I say MORE...

lol... on a lighter note.. very interesting ficcie... i look forward to more... nummyness. hehe!
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
in the armed forces and you write yaoi fanfiction... if I wasn't already happily married I would ask you to marry me... this story is super cute and needs to be continued post haste!
schedule January 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
XD *Dies laughing* Oh that's priceless! Lucky Bakura! I'll bet he's gonna LOVE this camping trip!
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
HA! Oh Marik, he's such a little devil~ It's a really great beginning! You certainly have my interest and you're really good a transitioning between parts. I hope you continue to write more of the awesome, I'll be sure to keep the compliments coming~ X3
person Ashray
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I cant wait to see their reaction about the missing sleeping bag!
I hope you update soon, it is totally funny, poor Ryou with the ägyptans all over him, and thhen all alone with Bakura...