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for The Doll

by MiyAsuka

schedule November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was great! very creepy, but great nonetheless... hope you decide to continue it someday!
person YamiKuro
schedule February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEE!!

please, i love it!

*runs off to read your other stories*

Kuro
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ryou sort of twisted innocence is interesting I think if it was consensual for bakura he'd have more fun.
J-chan
person AutumnAngel
schedule January 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello :)
I really like the beginning of your fic and I would be glad to read more!
I like the way you characterized Ryou - childlike but cruel
I didn't read often Tendershipping fics with a dominant Ryou... so I'm excited what will happen next
person YaoiMeowmaster
schedule January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm too lazy to login. :D AWESOME! I'm going to post my Ryou dominant fiction.