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Is 'this story is AMAZINGTASTICALLYWONDERFIFULL' good enough news? :3 I loved this chapter. Fights are always good...and imagining sweat covered pharaoh's is even funner :3

Still loving this story. I am enjoying everything about how you write. Thank you. I'm so sorry for your horrible week. I wish I could help you feel better. I hope this review helps. Please update soon. I want to know if everything is going okay with you and see more of this lovely story.

thank you thank you for updating! please update soon. i cant wait to find out what happens next!

ooooh confrontation! I can't WAIT to see what happens! Hurry! Update! Desperate!

Aw, Tavi, give yourself more credit, that was a great chapter! Do you have any idea what i would give to be a great puzzleshipping author like you...anything! Great chapter and well done!

Yay! You updated!!!!! This is getting really, REALLY good, I can't wait to see what happens next!

wow this is a very interesting story. I cannot wait for more~

You, indeed are a very mean author to leave everyone hanging like that. i want to know what happens, and to see what yugi's grandfather does to atemu. overall, good chapter! can't wait for the next one.

Of COURSE the plot bunny needs more food than you can give- ALL plot bunnies eat more than a single author's share can provide. That is why good writers live on reviews,caffine,and about three hours of sleep per week. Reviews are our fuel! Anyway,this story is really good,I wish I could favorite it but damn it all I can't. I will,however,be checking up on it periodically to make sure I don't miss any of the good stuff,just so you know! I also randomly got the urge to write for this genre again when I haven't in a couple years. Come to think of it though,I wrote some pretty good shit (including some XXX rated) over the years,most involving Thief King Bakura. Y'know,I've always been fascinated with the three Bakuras- the Thief,Zorc Necrophades (or 'Yami' Bakura) and little Ryou. I kidnapped Ryou from the show and replaced him with a clone actually,he's head of the Hospital Wing and the one who takes the Medical Team out when I do somethin' stupid and need healing. *reaches down hallway and yanks said boy to my side,revealing that he is idential to the one in the show exept for a bright silver teardrop earring dangling from his left ear* See? See? The poor boy has stitched me up many a time when I did something to piss off someone with a knife....or gun....or branding iron....(Ryou) *uncharachteristically angry growl* Or BOMBS! *grabs me by the ear and pulls me down to his level,looking somehow like an angry parent scolding thier child* Kakuzu told me about you deliberately,DELIBERATELY *shakes me using his hold on my ear* made Kimblee and Deidara as angry as possible and got yourself blown up into a hundred or more little peices no less than three hundred and seventy-two times!(Me)Owowowowowowowowowowowow!!! Ryou,Ryou let go that hurts dammit! Pointed ears are not your playthings,if you need a handhold grab a horn for Hades' sake! And I know I promised not to aggravate them,but I couldn't help it. Deidara insulted my arts again. All of them. (Ryou)....*sighs and lets go of my ear* Alright,I understand that. *suddenly grabs one of the thick black ram's horns that curl back from my temples and yanks,twisting my neck with several audible popping and cracking sounds* But don't think this gets you off the hook! As payment,you're helping me in the ward for a few days; Alucard went on a rampage and I need help healing. (Me)*meekly* Yes Ryou dear. (Ryou)Good Master Silva. You're learning. *strides off with me following closely from his grip on my horn*

Didn't know Ryou could be such a dominating Alpha if he's pushed hard enough,didja? Well trust me,he can and is. *rubs ear and neck gingerly*

I was so stoked (People still say stoked, right?) to find that you had updated again! It was another wonderful chapter. I hope you get a chance to update again soon. :)