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MUHAHAHAAHAHAAAA!! >:D
Now Atemu must bed for Yugi's forgiveness! I hope he gets what he deserves. And then I hope those too will make up ;_;
Thanks for the update Tavi, I love this story sooooo much! I hope you update soon!! Until then, bye~

I loved this chapter. Something about Atemu's confession to Mana was just so endearing. I can't wait to see how their new masters will treat them. I'm so impatient for the next chapter already. Good job on the last chapter. Please keep it up!

Thanks for the update!

:) Amazing chapter Tavi, I believe I'm in the mood for a bit of revenge. >.> Mmm spiteful Yugi? XD I only wish I could see his expresion.. And those of the rest of his entourage when they find out the tables have been turned ^^ I totally imagine Atem being gagged so that he can't talk.. Or swatted for speaking out of turn- Yugi wouldn't be cruel enough to mar his pretty skin.

So this is my first time doing this and I hope I'm doing it right. Chapter 17 was wonderful! I think it was easily one of your best. I know it's not suppose to be a funny chapter but all I can picture now is Seto saying "and for the record we were not sulking" while trying not to laugh. And I'm not sure how you picutred him saying it, but I keep seeing him with one hand on his hip while he holds his index finger of the other hand up while trying to keep a straight face and not laugh. You've made my day with that. I can't wait to see the results with Atemu now being Yugi's servant! Your story never ceases to amaze me!

WHAT THE HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU ATEMU?! How could you believe Dartz's word? and how the hell could Atemu treat Yugi like that without talking to him first. I know his mind was addled with wine but come on...why couldn't Atemu tell he was just saying that so he could have Yugi and the throne idiot!

I hope that Atemu learns the truth from his once best friend Pegasus and that he truely makes it up to Yugi, I know Yugi would forgive him eventually but not too soon. He's been hurt by the one he loved...

wow that was intense. i loved it! youre an amazing writer! please update soon.

Ooh, wow what a doozy xD Soo much going on in such a short period of time, I think I'll have to reread it to make sure I've kept everything straight in my head. Wonderful as always, I truly envy your talent :) And I'll be anxiously waiting for an update. Poor Yugi ;-; That selfish bastard Atemu better pay! Or I'll make you pay instead! <3 Only teasing -Naomie

NUUUUU Atemu don't you believe it! Yugi loves you! Damnit men are hopeless when they are drunk! Sober up you damn fool before it's too late! Nuuu Yugi!!!! *Huggles* Damnit Tavi don't tease us with cliffies! If you've already got them then update!!!! I'm gonna go mad!

OMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!! O_O
Sorry but I can't find any words after chapter 15 except O-M-G!!!
Atemu thinks Yugi has betrayed him? Lied to him, deceived him? T.T
GOD THAT IS SO SAD I DON'T WANT ANYTHING BAD TO HAPPEN TO YUGI ANYMORE, ESPECIALLY BY THE HANDS OF ATEMU!!? What happened in Yugi's past he hasn't told Atemu about? What's his relationship with Dartz?
Though it's a REALLY FUCKING GOOD CLIFFHANGER, I really really really want to read to next chapter! I don't think I can stand the wait..! >.<
This is one of best fics I've read, seriously... Anyway Tavi you rock! I love the way you write, and I've loved all the fics I've read from you this far!! Thank you soooooo much for writing, my life would be worthless without your fics! T.T (at least that's how I feel at the moment)