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Didn't have to wait long, theehee! Teview for the chibi eyes. =3 The OOC-ness doesn't bother me, it suits the story.

Can't wait for the next chapter!! =D

Aww, so much emotion, and I don't think it's out of character at all, considering the situation. In fact it's pretty much how I imagined it would go >.> But I have to admit I was rather confused during the fight between Atem and Jou, don't know if it was because of the switching views but I couldn't tell what was going on exactly through part of that. I just honestly don't know but apart from the confusion on my part it was really great :3 And just when I was finally starting to worry if you were okay. Great work Tavi, much love -Naomie

OMG this story is getting better and better with every chapter! Keep up the great work and I sooo cannot wait until the next chapter!!

AAWWWW...He finally admits that he was an ASS! Somehow I really find the end of that last chapter very adorable. There must be something wrong with me.

Wow that was an intense chapter. You write so well! Please update soon!

YES! Way to go Mana! *Sighs* I'm glad someone finally had the nerve to tell Atemu what a jerk he'd been, and what a idiot he was to believe that Yugi would ever lie to him. Atemu still loves his little Yugi, but I wonder has too much damage already been done? can he fix this mess of his own creating?

I'm glad Solomon told the guards to leave the 4 egyptians with him, and I do like the 'turn about is fair play' idea...I just hope that the 4 of them, especially Atemu can use the time wisely and prove to Yugi just how sorry he is for his previous actions, and I hope that after of brief period of uncertainty Yugi believes him, and returns to Egypt with him as the husband he now is...

Next chapter please...

OMG YES! Hehehehehe >.> Atemu is now forever ingrained in my mind with a kinky little slave outfit!
J-chan

Oh my GODS! *beats Atemu to an unrecognizable heap* stupid, nasty, petulantly childish moron! *beats him some more* grrrr. You don't deserve my beautiful Yugi, I hope he NEVER forgives you for it!



*huggles Tavi* Sorry I've been gone so long, I even missed a whole chapter! D: truth be told you are the only Yugioh story I am actually keeping up with at the moment, my brain has been taken over by Snarry and it doesn't look like that will be changing any time soon. now off to read the next chapter! because if things stay like this I'm gonna kill me a pharaoh!

I officially love Solomon, although I don't think Yugi is gonna react very well. I'm also amazed that those four were either foolish enough or desperate enough to go into Hyskos by themselves and most likely without telling anyone else where they were going. This seems to be turning into a very just punishment. I somehow see having Yugi keeping the Pharaoh gagged whenever he's in his presence 'so he won't be able to try and woo him with those pretty lies.' That would be torture to Atemu who wants to reconcile with him so badly. I can't wait to see what else you come up with for this. I hope you update again soon!