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......Okay, yes. Yes, I admit it...I totally want to see Yuugi take charge. xD PLEASE. Quite an entertaining story, by the way. I have enjoyed it.

You know, Tavi, you are STILL amazing. Even after all this time. Everytime I see an update on your profile, I get giddy and revert back into a rabid fangirl. I don't think you realize just how amazing you are. All in all, I want you to know just how much your work has inspired great happiness to even my dreariest of days. I don't care how long it takes between chapters, know that you have at least one patient fan, waiting in the wings for your next exceptional work of verbal art. On that note, from the past Atemu / Yugi stories you have composed with an (Eventual) topping Yugi were extremely sexy, cunning and well written. Not many people would be able to pull it off, but I think your ravenous plot bunny can fufill a fangirls most primal of needs. At first, when I read Angel of Mine, I wasn't sure how it would settle in my stomach, seeing my pharoah off his... erm.. throne. But... I fell in love! And then, silly me, I read Fleeing the Shadows, and that's when I knew you could make even the most unlikely of Yugi-topping scenerios, so realistic and so fitting, that it flowed naturally and beautifully. And I know you can rekindle that love for us once again! I await patiently for your next chapter. And once again, thank you for making my day. *hands you a bouquet of flowers*
Uro~

Thank you for the update. I don't think I can picture Yugi as the dominant one. Certainly I can picture him being very aggressive and assertive but still bottoming...only he is doing it from the top. I don't even know if that made sense to anyone other than myself. Anyways, can't wait to read what happens next.

I WANNA SEE A DOMINATING YUGI!!

What a wonderful chapter! I loved Atemu's reactions. This had me howling with laughter. My vote is for Dom. Yugi. I'd love to see what your creative mind would come up with. Can't hardly wait. Please update soon. Pretty Please with lost of sugar on top n_n I love every one of your stories and this one is beating "Impossible Standards" in my list of favorite stories that you've wrote. Hope to hear from you soon.

PLEASE!!! A YUGI DOMINANT LEMON NEXT CHAPTOR!!! CANT WAIT!!! I was laughing through the whole chapter! lol can't wait for your next chapter!

I'm very happy with the pace of their relationship in this one. Most of your other stories, while good, have the relationship moving far too fast. Also, because of the long amounts of time between updates, could you put a small recap at the beginning of each chapter? I tend to forget what happened previously when I realize there's a new update. It's quite frustrating.

Much love,
~_-*-_~ Sakura-Laurel ~_-*-_~

Hooray for updates!!! It looks lovely! I'm glad to see that there are fewer of some of your habits that I've been trying to break... *shakes Millennium Rod at* I WILL TRIUMPH!!! *Malik snatches back his Rod and runs away cackling maniacally* Shit... One tiny tiny thing before I chase after the little bastard- if I feed the plot bunny lemon cookies and lemonade, will it poop out a pretty lemon for everyone? <3 ECG *feeds the bunny all sorts of lemony goodness and then chases after Malik*

An excellent chapter! I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble with plagarists (may they all fail their English classes and eternally rot in summer school) and that you have been distracted from your writing by such a thing, but this chapter was well worth the wait.

I hope the shepherd boy confronts the dragon soon. I'm pretty sure he has already somewhat tamed the dragon without even trying. I wonder who will confess first between the two. They just keep dancing around each other and letting their insecurities get the best of them. Seto should just muster up all of that usual cool confidence, grab Jou, and passionately declare his undying love. Oh, man. That would be something to behold. Please update sooner than last time, because I can't wait to find out what's next.