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that was interesting...though, I think that Atemu'll find that Yugi isn't the typical royal, and in that sense will be quite the challenge for Atemu. However, I don't think that Yugi will appreciate being denied seeing anyone other than Atemu...Yugi would probably be almost willing to do as Atemu asks just for the opportunity to see his friends, if only for a little bit. (I say almost because Yugi has more honor than that.) I must say I like this characterization of Atemu...it makes the story interesting. I can't wait to see how his friends'll respond to the news that they've been enslaved. Update soon, this is just too good a story to leave us in suspense for long.

Geez Your stuff is such fun to read. Later

OMG!!! I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS STORY!!! but you know what, I would love to see Yami suffering for Yugi's love, he is such a bastard thinking that Yugi is just going to be a toy and that the kid must obey every one of his wishes!!! F%&$/%! I want to see him beg!!! Oh how much I would love to see that! Hope so *puppy eyes* hehehe and I am dying to read how are the others going to react to the fact that now they are slaves, hope the puppy bites Seto hehehe I love this story!!! POOR BOYS and poor Yugi, I would feel the same, to feel just like an object and that you must left behind all the things you love to become just a toy, no matter how hot is your master, the worst is that Yugi is going to fall for him and that is going to hurt even more, to love someone that it is only using you!!! T.T Thank you so much for sharing!!!

Awwwww, poor little Yugi. Atemu was an insensitive jerk in the last chapter but I still absolutely adore him. Can't wait for Yugi to change his mind about the Pharaoh. They are so cute together. BTW, I'm still not clear on how old Atemu really is. It would be great if you could clear that up.

OMG I ACTUALLY WANT TO SMACK ATEMU!!! he's being a jerk I hate when he's a jerk because I love him so much. This was so good and I really love it. I know that they're all going to fall in love with eachother eventually I'll just have to suffer through the rough patches until they do. Keep writing a love it!!!!

Tavi, have i ever mentioned how much i love your work??? this story is so awesome!! and its great that you dont just jump into them meeting eachother and BAM they love each other. keep writing <3

I hope that they can get revenge for the atrocity committed. This is fun...a little wordy but fun.

It's...it's...WONDERFUL! *twitches* need more. Need a tavi fix

Sucked??? NOOOOOOOOOO, no way, it was a great chapter, evil cliff but great chapter hehehe lucky Yugi *¬* I would love to be Atemu's slave. I love your style and how you write your characters, it is a good story, I don't care if it is going to be long, the only thing I ask is try to update as soon as you can and please end it, don't care if it is long but you must give to it an ending!!! Poor Yugi his family sucked! I just hope Atemu finally understands what was happening to Yugi and that his dad was the evil one :( I am dying to know how everyone is going to react next, at least we know who is going to belong to whom hehehe *¬* I want to be a slave too T.T

why not Atemu...why shouldn't you get something out of it? Besides, Yugi really didn't do anything wrong, you can't honestly think that someone who was the type of person who would take that many lives would just surrender his own like that.