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by tavia454

schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can tell easily, that this'll be one of my favorite stories. That when theres nothing else good on AFF.net, I'll come back and reread this story.
Excellent story.
Please update as soon as possible.
I am so lovin' where this is going. :D
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I wanna save all of the prisoners and smack some sense into the Egyptians. But glad that Bakura will stop being an ass.
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh Honey! I love your story! Don't worry if the updates take to long just, please, please, please, don't stop writing!!! I love Mahaado so much he is so gentle and sweet, my poor yugi will need a good friend to help him and I want to kick Atemu! He is so blind!! Mahaado is right, Yugi have suffered a lot, he is pure and I hope Atemu will see that in time, if not, he is going to hurt Yugi and instead of winning his love, the poor boy is going to run away from him. Your Ryou is great because he is strong and he is going to be a pain in the butt for Kura, we haven't seen much of Marik and Malik, and oh Seto! hahahaha, my fav couple is Seto/Jou and I am dying to know more about them, Seto needs to teach some manners to his golden puppy hahahaha probably he spank the poor puppy with a rolled up papirus hahahaha I would love to know about all the couples but I know this story is more about Yugi and Atemu, but if you have time and inspiration to write a little of the other couples I would be very thankful but it doesn't mattter if you are just going to focus in Yugi and Atemu, because just their love story makes great your story, I will try to have patiente but it is going to be hard because this story is wonderful, thank you so much for sharing, I will be waiting for the next chapter!!! T.T sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language.
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^-^ Your story is just amazing :3 I keep checking back every few days to see if it's been updated <3333 I can't wait to read more >w< *hugs*
person MewMew2
schedule February 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Quite the interesting turn of events I see. I must say, the scene of Yugi threatening to jump off the edge caught me by surprise. Please update once more when you have the chance, this is a great story so far.
person tash1021
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wonderful please update soon
schedule February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I can't wait for Atemu to open his damn eyes. When he finally realizes what is going on he'll probably be in too deep already. I mean come on, isn't it obvious that he's already feeling something for Yugi. I love his ignorance. I actually find it a bit endearing. Poor Ryou. Hopefully everything will be resolved between him and Bakura later on.
schedule February 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
short but good. damn have you gotten me hooked on this story!
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I adore this fic. Your stories are always so amazing. I couldn't help myself I start reading one of your fics and have to go back and re-read the others. I've made it through Impossible Standards and started on Angel of Mine...again. I can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yuugi is not that innocent that he doesn't understand. I hope he will learn to love Atemu. He is too worried about his firends fates right now to properly worry about his own. He would do anything to keep them safe and can't really control what happens to them. Good chapter.