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omg you're amazing! update soon!

Great great great great story cant wait for the next chapter!

you are forgiven for the possible long time it will take for updates because of the nice length and awesomeness of this chapter. I truly, TRULY love this story, I just wish the Egyptians would get their heads out of their asses and realize that they Hysokos people should neither be their enemies nor their slaves. power has slightly gone to their heads. *Smacks all egyptians except Mahaado.*

Poor Atemu, I can understand him better now, but that doesn't give him the right to be a bastard!!!, My poor Yugi, he needs a friend now, he is suffering so much :( Looks like Yugi will be exactly what Atemu needs :P but he will need to learn to be good to him first, if not, all will be lost, he want a willing toy and he is so blind that he is not able to see the real treasure he is holding in his arms, Can I kick him??? Hope Granpa kick him!!! Grandpa is going to be really angry when he finds out what is happening to Yugi!! And I love Mahaado hahaha, he is so sweet :) Poor Yugi, everything is so confusing to him, he has a big problem, to be or not to be a toy, he likes Atemu a lot, but Atemu is just showing to him his bad side and that will close Yugi's heart to him, he will get his body but to get his heart that will be hard if he keep doing stupid things!!! >:( Love you so much for sharing this story! Can wait to read some more but I will try to be a good girl and wait T.T poor meeeee. Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language.

Thank you so much for posting once more. Excellent job in writing the river scene, please update once more when inspired to do so.

im really enjoying this story but bakura's so mean that i get lil tearsvin my eyes :( but it adds to the stories greatness :) cant wait for the next update!

Oh my, where's grandpa when you need him.....him or Indiana Jones he could save Yugi and his friends ^-^
J-chan

Great job! You really left this reader wanting! I can't wait to see more. I hope the along the way Yugi starts to really develop a back bone, silent strength only goes so far.

Good chapter. Poor Ryou and Yugi. I hope Bakura will keep his promise and not hurt Ryou anymore. I wonder just what Atemu is going to do to Yugi.

ooooo yugis in trouble!!!!! please update soon im gonna go crazy if you dont