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by tavia454

schedule April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as usual. C ya


tinkletimekelly
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So sweet. Atemu finally realised that Yugi and his friends did not do it and they lost someone close too. I hope things will get better for them all soon. Yugi is realising Atemu is indeed a human with feelings and love. Malik is really feisty and protective. This bodes well for them all. Good chapter.
schedule March 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy!... The plot thickens even more! Oh dear gods, I can't tell you how hooked you've gotten me on this story! I am just desperate to know what happens next and who was truly behind the raid. But I think I'm going to breathe a bit easier now that Atemu knows the truth. Perhaps they could tell Bakura the news that they aren't their enemies after all? I feel so bad for Ryou, he's got it the worst of all of them.
person XMiyuX
schedule March 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying every bit of this story XD
Also why do you apologize for the update? You should be rewarded *hands over a box of rewards* out of all the stories I've read your the only that actually comes back and updates. Most stories that I've read still haven't been update *look at a clock* and I've waited for a long time too =.=
Anyway I can understand you taking at least a month because RL is extremely random and sometimes crazy. I know I month sounds long but since this story is soooo damn good it worth the wait X3
Anyway I can't wait for the next chapter (I know I said I could wait but I'm just loving this story) X3
P.S. Thanks for updating a great story so fast ^-^
schedule March 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
X3 <3 Such an adorable story, if everyone weren't sleeping at 5:30 in the morning I would have been giggling in excitement ;D Good luck with your job- I know how much it sucks to have such an overbearing schedule but I'm sure you'll eventually work around it ^^

-Excited for more, but don't push yourself <3 NaomieKeiko
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG! T.T Poor Jou!! I didn't know if Shizuka was going to be his sister in this story, poor girl T.T, Jou is going to get mad with pain when he finally discover what happen to his beloved sis, hope Seto knows what to do with a hurt puppy :( he must be good to Jou T.T
It was time Atemu, finally!! Now you really know for sure that all these lovely boys are innocent!!! You beast!! And all of you have been treating them like trash!!!! Hope Grampa kick your nuts when he finds out what you have been doing to these kids >:( Well,Mahaado is going to be someone very important, maybe he can kick some sense in the brutes to behave like educate humans instead of caveman, really hope that after this they will be able to open their eyes (and hearts) and try to repair the damage, hope they suffer a bit, they deserve love, all the brutes, but I hope they suffer just a bit before getting it hehehe, to compensate a bit their stupidity. They must learn that love and kindness is not a weakness, they make us stronger, the big burden that they have been carrying is too much to keep doing it alone, they will need someone to be there for them, they need love, tons of love and with time the kids will be able to crak little by little the walls that surround theirs hearts, Yugi is already doing it, I am a little curious how is going to work for the rest.
Thank you so much for sharing your story, I love it, hope your job gets better and don't worry, I will wait like a good girl for the next chapter. Take care ok, too much work could damage your health!!! Maybe you should buy some vitamins at least! Wish you the best luck! Tons of kisses. :) Sorry any mistakes here, English is not my native language :P
person MewMew2
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The connection between twins is something that cannot be properly described. it is without a doubt, the deepest connection that one can have to another living being. Thank you for posting, you did an excellent job.
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lawl its funny! your last post was right before i lost my internet and you didn't update till i got it back...im sorry i thought it was humorus
person dragonlady222
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I hope Yugi is wrong and there is a chance for love. Too bad Granpa doesn't know what is going on.