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for Mistaken Assumptions

by tavia454

schedule May 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to Osiris that Atemu finally is understanding Yugi, he was making too much mistakes, but it is nice to see that now he is really taking care of Yugi, Yugi is falling for him but he will only be able to give himself completely is he trust Atemu and if Atemu returns his love in the same way, Yugi wants to be Atemus partner not his slave!!! Tahnk you so much for sharing, take care, love your work!!!
schedule April 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Yugi is starting to see the real Atem and he is seeing the real Yugi. I wonder if he will ever admit to Yugi he made a mistake in his judgement of him and let him free.
person RayeMoon
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It's a good story. I love it. I hope that Yugi comes to accept that Atemu is sincere. This is so awesome, dancing back and forth between 'oh, they're going to... no they're not...' lol. Aw, Atemu, talk about unnecessary reaction! (Him getting angry about Yugi saying he was sorry for him having to grow up alone under all that pressure.) I really want this to continue!
person YamiKuro
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As of two days ago, i have now read all your stories! YAY!

Lovely chapter! Whats going on with Ryou and Malik though? I miss my Ry-chan! ^_^

Love,
Kuro
person catti
schedule April 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love you to death Tavi..but boy is this story dull and boring...needs to heat up just a bit..I know there is a story line throbbing but man its like a dull NBA basketball game..BORING!!!...(wish you had an Indy car race to liven things up)...sorry..love you to death but this story is like death...catti
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
DAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! ^_^ the cuteness is sweet and fluffy! just what I needed! thank the gods they are finally beginning to communicate!
person Kalliana
schedule April 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Must have more.
person Anahi
schedule April 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I read this story (and most of your others) and i am dissapointed in myself for not being a regular reader! I demand rights! (Haha) Your story is great! Love the plot so far! (Keep feeding that bunny!) I can't wait for this to update and I also pray your situation (jobs/economy) get's better. It's tough on everyone. Thanks for giving me a repreive from all those morbid thoughts with this cute fluff! (Sex? Who cares! GIVE ME CUDDLING!~)
-Forgive my horrible spelling!-
-Ana
person YamiKuro
schedule April 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As of right now, i have now read EVERY CHAPTER OF ALL YOUR STORIES! YAY! ^_^ *throws confetti*

I love your work, you put so much heart into it! I'm ashamed i haven't read them before now! REally i am!

I am now a devoted slave to your will! ^_^ *bows to you*

I am eagerly awaiting another chapter! ^_^

Love,
Kuro
person heidlebergchick
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
luv this story! Really good thanks for the update!