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December 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice! Very nice. I'm glad that Kaiba finally admitted his own defeat, very mature of him. :P this was very good and very well written. Kudos!
schedule
December 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad... not bad at all... Will ther be anouther part to this? And if I may say... could you please try and paragraph without a new line each time for sentences... it gets a bit annoying to have to read down the page for each new line.