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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all this is a very good one either. The only thing I don't like is the ending. I mean ... you can't possibly just stop there! There's so much more to tell ...
The idea itself is great though. Keep up the good work.
The idea itself is great though. Keep up the good work.
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January 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was again so great!!! I'm now going to read the part two on FF!!! Thanks al lot!!!
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May 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*heart*
Wow. I think I've gone and fallen in love with this story. It's so wonderful to be able to real such a well-written and well put together story.
Oh demonic!Yami is such a treat to read. --purrs-- I adore his, hmm, how do I put it? Protectiveness towards Yugi? Hmn, not quite right. Uh...A delightful fondness leaning towards possessiveness.
I would love to read a sequel to this story. It's interesting and exciting and very, very capturing your complete and utter attention. I am so going to have to add it to my recommendations. Oh yes. That way I'll be able to find it whenever I want. --nods--
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~
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Wow. I think I've gone and fallen in love with this story. It's so wonderful to be able to real such a well-written and well put together story.
Oh demonic!Yami is such a treat to read. --purrs-- I adore his, hmm, how do I put it? Protectiveness towards Yugi? Hmn, not quite right. Uh...A delightful fondness leaning towards possessiveness.
I would love to read a sequel to this story. It's interesting and exciting and very, very capturing your complete and utter attention. I am so going to have to add it to my recommendations. Oh yes. That way I'll be able to find it whenever I want. --nods--
Hugs,
~Shi-koi~
*heart*
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NICE!
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now that was intrigueing...too bad it ended there...it could have gone on and gotten pretty good.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
My this one is good, very good... It would be very AWESOME if you could write what happens next, like a sequel to this one-shot...
Anyway, like I said it's really good, didn't think I would read a one-shot where Ryuo is kindda mean... But I liked it... ^_^
Anyway, like I said it's really good, didn't think I would read a one-shot where Ryuo is kindda mean... But I liked it... ^_^
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oi!!! This more of an incomplete story that is forever left in a cliffy!!! And a lot of typos.
Other then that, the story sucks you in until you only want to peel your eyes away until
you read every word to the point that you reach the end of the page. Or maybe its just me. XP
But it still feels like it's incomplete.
Other then that, the story sucks you in until you only want to peel your eyes away until
you read every word to the point that you reach the end of the page. Or maybe its just me. XP
But it still feels like it's incomplete.
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November 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awww... no way should this just be a one-shot. This is way too interesting and good!! I know you probably don't want to, but it would be incredibly awesome if you turned this into a multi-chapter fic. It was a great read!!