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ok
u hve my attention
pls update dis again soon

Nice!! I cant wait for the next chapter!

I love this story, and i love the song. Did you know that its the theme song from the twilight : the soundtrack? Yeah...

Kuro

XD I actually feel sorry for Erick! XD getting a You-are-a-mean-evil-nasty-person glare from Yugi, he probably felt like he had kicked a puppy or something, getting a lok like that, especially since the poor guy probably had no clue what he had done. And Yugi hun, don't worry, Yami/Atemu does that to everyone. it's in his nature to be just... WOW. This is a good start, I hope you remain inspired. I look forward to reading more.

Hello again! So happy to have you back! Yay! This is a great start, I'm anxious to see where it goes. Please continue?!

Not bad. Just write a little more.