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yay! the extra scene...though, Yami had to endure electricution to get those two to help him...maybe its a good thing that he didn't tell Yugi about that, Yugi would have been ticked. Looking forward to the sequel.

Yami should be okay...its just a shoulder injury, nothing major. (but, then again i don't want to jinx it either.) Update soon.

I Love story and I would like see sence that you skipped and do sequel??

thanks

Poor Yami. Facing Parenthood again. xD make more chapters to see if Joey and Seto will have a baby and Yugi having the baby. I love to see Yugi having babies. Maybe a sequel is more indicated. Please

cool, loved the story...almost wish you'd write a sequel...but i won't say no to the extra scene.

yeah! Baby was born...now their in for some fun...well, fun to read, not so much fun for them... (say hello to cry filled days and sleepless nights) Update soon.

oh boy, why can't she just take a hint and give up and move on. (And yes, I know the answer to that question is there wouldn't be much of a story if she did that, but still thats beside the point.) I hope she doesn't hurt Yugi or the baby. As for Yami, I'd like to think he can defend himself, but...you never know in stories like this. But, I am almost willing to take up the cry Death to Tea...but I'll hold off, she causes anymore trouble, and I'll begin to suggest methods of her removal.

Awwww so cute. Yugi is having a girl. I love it. Please update as soon as you can.

that was nice...aww poor Yugi being so nervous. But, thats a nice name that they came up with, especially Yami's reasoning for the name. Can't wait to see whats going to happen next.

You should have let Seto punch Tea on the face and broke her nose. Or Yami. Better yet, Yami should have bitched-slapped the cunt then threw her out of the office... by the hair. *glares at the fucking bitch* I hate her and her stupid friendship rants. She should never have existed in Yu-Gi-Oh in the first place. She ruins it by being there.

^_^ Now that I got it out of my chest... I like your story but it really could do a little more work. Like editing how it was written. It's hard to read a fic when you bunched up everything in one paragraph, especially the dialogues. You need to separate them and arrange them into something easier/cleaner to read but the impact of what's happening in a scene will be much better. A little more plot depth, maybe. Even though, I, myself only concentrate on the Yami/Yugi interactions it wouldn't hurt to make the story a little more meaningful and "deeper" for a lack of a better word. ^__^ Keep on writing and improving then, alright? Thanks for sharing such a cute fic. ^o^